Pitch evaluation

I believe my pitch went quite well, i put in a fair amount of time into the animoto and think that had I gone with a power point or generic moodboard it wouldve been a bit bland, animoto really gave it a kick. From the questions posed to me by the group I decided to do a artsit as i was toying between artist or group but the questions really helped me narrow it down. Another thing posed was that my genre isnt particularly wide and that it doesnt get much coverage with exception to like 2 other magazines, like mixmag, and that my audience needed to be more precise as my Animoto seemed to hint that the magazine was for more live DJ's who remix on the spot than laptop musicians.